{"id":148,"date":"2007-11-30T23:33:33","date_gmt":"2007-12-01T06:33:33","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/dubinko.info\/blog\/2007\/11\/30\/4-things-ive-learned-writing-mostly-4-novels\/"},"modified":"2007-11-30T23:41:29","modified_gmt":"2007-12-01T06:41:29","slug":"4-things-ive-learned-writing-mostly-4-novels","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/dubinko.info\/blog\/2007\/11\/4-things-ive-learned-writing-mostly-4-novels\/","title":{"rendered":"4 things I&#8217;ve learned writing (mostly) 4 novels"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>If you want to get anything done, give it to a busy person&#8230;<\/p>\n<p>In my life, I&#8217;ve started four novels, completed my goals on three, gotten to &#8220;The End&#8221; on two, and completely flamed out on one.<\/p>\n<p>The first was in 2001. I hadn&#8217;t written much since high school. Something clicked in my head that made me realize that writing wasn&#8217;t some kind of black art (as one particular teacher had drilled into his credulous students). It was doable. You take pencil and paper and write one word after another. Voil\u00c3\u00a0. I was so taken with this simple idea that every single thing I ever learned about writing went out the window. I had Swifties, danglers, tell-vs-show, you name it. There&#8217;s enough material in there for several <a href=\"http:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Bulwer-Lytton_Fiction_Contest\" title=\"Bad writing competition\">Bulwer-Lytton<\/a> contests. By the time I had 70 hand-written pages, the thing collapsed under it&#8217;s own weight and the story reached an abrupt, borderline-surrealistic &#8220;ending&#8221; to abuse the term. I have evidence that I even typed it all in and pressed on for a 2nd draft.<\/p>\n<p>By 2003 my <a href=\"http:\/\/xformsinstitute.com\" title=\"XForms Institute\">non-fiction book<\/a> was published&#8211;my writing career was under way! Part of the elaborate book proposal dance involved me writing some online articles, including one piece of <a href=\"http:\/\/rds.yahoo.com\/_ylt=A0oGkm_T.FBHzDIB3vZXNyoA;_ylu=X3oDMTE5N3RzbW0wBHNlYwNzcgRwb3MDMQRjb2xvA3NrMQR2dGlkA1BSMDE0XzgyBGwDV1Mx\/SIG=12961jb3r\/EXP=1196575315\/**http%3a\/\/www.xml.com\/pub\/a\/2002\/09\/25\/linkoffering.html\" title=\"A Hyperlink Offering\">fiction<\/a> that was well-received in the tiny circle that was its intended audience. At this stage I adopted electronic writing, and ditched my crashy Windows laptop for a Mac, a vast improvement.<\/p>\n<p>In 2005 I discovered <a href=\"http:\/\/www.nanowrimo.org\" title=\"National Novel Writing Month\">NaNoWriMo<\/a>, and though I thought it would be a lost cause, I signed up. No way it could be as bad as the previous attempt. I had a new job, and was able to skip a few lunches to write, not to mention intense evenings and weekends. The end goal is 50,000 words during the 30 days of November, that&#8217;s 1,666 and two-thirds words per day. All of the prior month I spent outlining, making maps, creating my universe. I used the simplest of tools, my text editor and one file per chapter. I learned that the command <code>wc *.txt<\/code> could easily give me a combined word count. To my surprise, it worked. I reemerged into daylight with a completed a full story arc loosely based on the earlier story, and ended up with just over 50,000 words. The text itself was very rough, but I read the whole thing out loud in a podcast to edit it. In terms of improvement, it was huge, but still far from publishable.<\/p>\n<p>2006 and another NaNoWriMo rolled around, and I took off on a more ambitious storyline with far fewer notes going into it. The story itself involved the same general characters of the previous two episodes, but with a deeper, more mature feeling to it. In short, I finally wrote a piece of fiction to be proud about afterwards, though when I hit 50,000 words I felt really burned out; hit &#8220;save&#8221; and left the story arc unfinished.<\/p>\n<p>The pull to dig in to an intensive 2nd draft of the story was immense, but just too many things were going on, including a new arrival in the family and a new set of job responsibilities. I never got more than a few dozen pages into the rewrite. When NaNoWriMo 2007 came upon me, I had a tough choice&#8230;do I write something fresh, or try to rework the previous novel? Fresh. A completely new story line, new characters, new setting, new everything. As of a few days ago, I finished the draft, compressing parts of the story as needed to meet both the 50 kiloword goal and the complete story arc. In preparation, I read a number of books, but as far as written outlines, maps, etc. go, almost nothing happened before November 1. I saved enough of the &#8220;fun stuff&#8221; that a second revision of this story will be a joy. Overall, another improvement year-over-year.<\/p>\n<p>There&#8217;s only one kink to the &#8220;if you want to get something done&#8230;&#8221; idea: my slides for the <a href=\"http:\/\/2007.xmlconference.org\/public\/schedule\/detail\/277\" title=\"WebPath\">XML Conference talk<\/a> I have in a few days are still unfinished&#8230; -m<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>If you want to get anything done, give it to a busy person&#8230; In my life, I&#8217;ve started four novels, completed my goals on three, gotten to &#8220;The End&#8221; on two, and completely flamed out on one. The first was in 2001. I hadn&#8217;t written much since high school. 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